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Teachers’ written comments and their effects on students’ revisions Wilson, Jennifer Ruth
Abstract
This study examines effects of teachers' written comments on students' writing, specifically the number of revisions students make in response to teachers' comments. The two teachers involved in this study were colleagues and had completed a study together previously. Analysis of teachers' comments (whether content-based or convention-based) and differences between high-, medium- and low-level writers' (ability rating based on teachers' assessment of written work) revisions are included. Teachers' written comments on students' (n=52) narrative writing (n= 139) from two grade-seven classes were categorized and coded, as were students' revisions made in response to their teacher's comments. Results of descriptive and correlational analyses show there are certain written comments that teachers make on students' writing that elicit a greater number of revisions from students than others. Although the teachers had worked together previously presenting workshops on writing instruction and had discussed commenting practices at length, differences between commenting styles became evident. Teacher 1 's comments were largely content-based, with the greatest percentage of student revisions relating to content-based questions, and for Teacher 2, whose comments were mainly convention-based, convention-based statements resulted in the greatest percentage of student revisions. Findings also reveal that the number and type of revisions made by students is strongly related to the types of comments teachers most often make, and that teachers' commenting emphasis, on either the content or conventions of writing, remain relatively consistent over the seven month term of the study. An examination of the differences between the comments made on high-, medium-, and low-level writers' papers indicate there is a tendency for the teachers to focus more on conventions of writing when responding on the lowlevel writers' papers than on medium- and high-level writers' papers. In addition, the number of associated student responses to teachers' comments varies depending on students' writing level, student-teacher relationships, and teacher expectations.
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Teachers’ written comments and their effects on students’ revisions
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University of British Columbia
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2002
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This study examines effects of teachers' written comments on students' writing, specifically
the number of revisions students make in response to teachers' comments. The two teachers
involved in this study were colleagues and had completed a study together previously.
Analysis of teachers' comments (whether content-based or convention-based) and differences
between high-, medium- and low-level writers' (ability rating based on teachers' assessment of
written work) revisions are included. Teachers' written comments on students' (n=52)
narrative writing (n= 139) from two grade-seven classes were categorized and coded, as were
students' revisions made in response to their teacher's comments. Results of descriptive and
correlational analyses show there are certain written comments that teachers make on students'
writing that elicit a greater number of revisions from students than others. Although the
teachers had worked together previously presenting workshops on writing instruction and had
discussed commenting practices at length, differences between commenting styles became
evident. Teacher 1 's comments were largely content-based, with the greatest percentage of
student revisions relating to content-based questions, and for Teacher 2, whose comments were
mainly convention-based, convention-based statements resulted in the greatest percentage of
student revisions. Findings also reveal that the number and type of revisions made by students
is strongly related to the types of comments teachers most often make, and that teachers'
commenting emphasis, on either the content or conventions of writing, remain relatively
consistent over the seven month term of the study. An examination of the differences between
the comments made on high-, medium-, and low-level writers' papers indicate there is a
tendency for the teachers to focus more on conventions of writing when responding on the lowlevel
writers' papers than on medium- and high-level writers' papers. In addition, the number
of associated student responses to teachers' comments varies depending on students' writing
level, student-teacher relationships, and teacher expectations.
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eng
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2009-08-17
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Vancouver : University of British Columbia Library
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For non-commercial purposes only, such as research, private study and education. Additional conditions apply, see Terms of Use https://open.library.ubc.ca/terms_of_use.
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10.14288/1.0078193
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University of British Columbia
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2002-05
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Graduate
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